After discussing our second idea with our teacher she liked the pitch but did not like the idea for the first verse as it did not seem to fit in with the music from the video. So as group we came up with an alternative idea for the first verse.
First verse - We see the girl from the woods draped in steamers, she walks along a path and sees the clown holding balloons, the shot will not show her arm which is nearest the clown and then watches the clown till it is out of sight but as the camera pulls away the arm that had been cut out there will be a balloon. When she realises she has the balloon she turns back to the clown who has disappeared. Then there will be a cut to the girl sat on a chair in the woods with streamers wrapped around her body and the clown will appear from behind her and covers her face.
I think this idea fits in better with both the music and storyline as it makes the clown seem mysterious and it indicates that she may have a spilt personality disorder.
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