Thursday 18 March 2010

Second rough cut

Untitled from Jack Osman on Vimeo.

The second rough cut has been improved from our first rough cut, especially the introduction. The introduction now grabs the viewers attention. Although from user feedback from our teacher she did not like it all being in black and white and taking the horror of the clown. She liked the last section when it changed from black and white to colour to that it has come to life. She said that the timing was out in the first verse and the images did not hit the beat.

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